[lookout below]

I J R > M P

[Oli-dogg]

OMG. Dead yourself, old woman

BEW>Ownster Newtwork

[Major Private]

I J R > M P

Cool
Let us know when you 2 break up, mkaaa?

[Jaymac]

Yo, boys, you don’t talk about my car, my phone or dog
Don’t make me slap you right into a Pepsi-induced fog

Now Oli’s got my back and he’s really just all right
But guess who brought “J” here to carry on the fight?

Re-cog-nize the BEW cause she’s smarter than IT jackoffs
Battling you is like watching Raiden/MPrivate losing in the smackoffs

So rack this bitch and her superior riffs a’spitting
I’m gentle, just like Bird and his faggot softball hitting

You could specialize and Flumperize your raps like a dumbass juggle
Or show me up on the tennis court like Sandog’s backhand struggle

In the end I like you both but BEW’s the outright Champ
And try and try and try yet you get nothing but writer’s cramp

How’s it feel for you big boys getting’ burned by a woman’s chatter?
It’s a fight for men but all you display is terrible fecal matter

Anyone else aroused by this?

[Jaymac]

What did I tell you Jay? Raiden, what?, Major Private....looks like a trifecta. All we need now is Ashsak.

I may-slap Jaymac with a play-rap for fun
Not pay-back just laid-back, better pray-that I’m done
On the day-that you’re run, I might get involved-in-it
I’ll be swinging my dick, not sitting back holding-it

Knocking out fools who I battle for the hell-of-it
I’m a mercenary poster, a ruthless rap delegate
Your responses had better-get, a bit more affectionate
You’ll need me on your side, so send props - I’m expecting-it

I won’t take you personal, or get the wrong impression
I’m giving you a lesson, so chill out and stop stressin’
This raw Dogg aggression, I’m dishing out as standard
Some forums banned-it, because they don’t understand-it

Some posters command-it, and don’t try to fight-it
While others too retarded like dumb-fuck Major Private…
Try to bite back, but so lame it’s irrelevant
Before he was gay, he was involuntarily celibate

But back to you Jay, with your smack-talk so sacred
Relax the grip on your crown; I’m not tryin’ to take-it
Without it you’re naked, lost, vulnerable and scared
I hope you’re prepared, to pucker up and be spared!

In this thread it is said, Jay and Oli made progress,
We made it clear that in here, its all good we can confess,
That we can drop rhymes and rap battle each other,
Doesnt makes us adversaries, any more than gay lovers.

Jay is down with Oli raps, always bring admiration,
Any bitches still in doubt, should check my UJ location,
Still recognizing the bullshit, the worst I have seen, G
When Oli got banned for running shit on Martini.

One thing's still to say, your response I want to lesson it,
When i read your reply and see words like "affectionate",
I see you mentioned your dick, you said "naked" and "pucker",
Jay mac is not gay, and won't fake it mother fucker.

So let's understand we can both bring a rap force,
But in doing it please, keep our hands on our own balls,
I'll walk the fine line between genius and insanity,
If you'll walk the line between respect and Jay faggotry.

[what?]

it's good that we're keeping all the shitty poetry in one thread. later, slouches

[Blueeyedwoman]

You can't do it, Pathetic Loser.

[Jaymac]

Yo, boys, you don’t talk about my car, my phone or dog
Don’t make me slap you right into a Pepsi-induced fog

Now Oli’s got my back and he’s really just all right
But guess who brought “J” here to carry on the fight?

Re-cog-nize the BEW cause she’s smarter than IT jackoffs
Battling you is like watching Raiden/MPrivate losing in the smackoffs

So rack this bitch and her superior riffs a’spitting
I’m gentle, just like Bird and his faggot softball hitting

You could specialize and Flumperize your raps like a dumbass juggle
Or show me up on the tennis court like Sandog’s backhand struggle

In the end I like you both but BEW’s the outright Champ
And try and try and try yet you get nothing but writer’s cramp

How’s it feel for you big boys getting’ burned by a woman’s chatter?
It’s a fight for men but all you display is terrible fecal matter

I remember back, hearing rap in the wayback,
One thing you'd find, in the CDs of Jaymac,
Is nothing but dudes, thats where you find the real quality,
Thats what I'm about so fuck the sexual equality,
Before you get smacky, I'll be quick to allay that,
The guys just do it better, so save the half assed gay smack,
But getting to the rhyme and moving on from the gender,
There's a few things that you would do well to remember,
Writing raps is not easy, there's a trick to proper rhyming,
To start, count syllables and consider proper timing,
Your rap wasn't bad, not saying that I hate it,
But if you'd work on what I said, it wouldn't read so syncopated,
The other points to address, are all problems with content,
And I'll speak to that, to the maximal extent,
For instance the first thing, here it is now, let's see,
Since when did a fog get induced by a Pepsi?
Second thing is the fact you claim to be running the smack,
But when a contest was made, I saw you running from that,
As for bringing the Jay, smack champ, you want credit?
When every post was mine, I typed it and said it,
I'll close this off here, you have to work on some chores,
Until you get this stuff done, the fecal matter is yours.

[Oli-dogg]

Yo, boys, you don’t talk about my car, my phone or dog
Don’t make me slap you right into a Pepsi-induced fog

Now Oli’s got my back and he’s really just all right
But guess who brought “J” here to carry on the fight?

Re-cog-nize the BEW cause she’s smarter than IT jackoffs
Battling you is like watching Raiden/MPrivate losing in the smackoffs

So rack this bitch and her superior riffs a’spitting
I’m gentle, just like Bird and his faggot softball hitting

You could specialize and Flumperize your raps like a dumbass juggle
Or show me up on the tennis court like Sandog’s backhand struggle

In the end I like you both but BEW’s the outright Champ
And try and try and try yet you get nothing but writer’s cramp

How’s it feel for you big boys getting’ burned by a woman’s chatter?
It’s a fight for men but all you display is terrible fecal matter

You fed this site to Jay and he bit you on the hand?
Well I’ll be damned, if that didn’t go as planned
Keep crunching the sand, that he kicked in your face
Best chew it up with grace, and get back in your place

Oli-dogg will erase, any hope of succeeding
‘Outright champ’ is misleading….continue on reading
There’ll be no proceeding, ‘til this woman starts pleading
For a one-on-one meeting, I don’t care if you’re bleeding

You’re into dog breeding, I’m a dogg – touch my bone
I never mentioned your car or your ‘cellular’ phone
Leave my faeces alone, cause my dogg-shit’s a weapon
Strategically placed for these retards to step-in

It wasn’t meant for you BEW, but I’ll give you a clue
Which ‘tard stepped in poo?.....go check Raiden’s shoe
Check Major Private’s too, only take you a minute
Oli-dogg laid the trap and these fools fell right in-it

Their stupidity no limit, no matter which way you spin-it
They pair up for the fight, but never seem to win-it
End up at the clinic, smacked up needing stitches
Any It’er in here, could own both these bitches

PS- BEW, there’s no writer’s cramp - especially since I’m typing
You’re still my favourite bitch, you always post to my liking :d

[Oli-dogg]

I see you mentioned your dick, you said "naked" and "pucker",
Jay mac is not gay, and won't fake it mother fucker.

:loool: Fair enough. I didn't want to alienate my Ownster fans.

[Blueeyedwoman]

War BEW's superior female raps.

[Oli-dogg]

it's good that we're keeping all the shitty poetry in one thread. later, slouches

what? is it with you, and your envy of our rhyming?
Everytime you sign-in, you start refining your whining (

[Oli-dogg]

War BEW's superior female raps.

:wub: I like it when lady rappers get mad. Bring it on. The sooner we go to war the sooner we get to have "make-up" love while you fondle my e-nuts. Jay, this last bit excludes you.

[trouble]

Jaymac > all the other raps in this thread. Sorry BEW!

MP come on, she had you at fecal matter, admit it! hehe

[Ashsak]

This thread demonstrates why white people should not rap. Teh shit's like watching retarded people try to fuck...and less entertaining.

[Major Private]

:wub:

[Blueeyedwoman]

Jaymac > all the other raps in this thread. Sorry BEW!

MP come on, she had you at fecal matter, admit it! hehe

Troub, are you trying to strangle that puppy in your av?

[trouble]

Troub, are you trying to strangle that puppy in your av?

Nah that's is my hubby holding him up. The puppy is a 5 yr old 92 lb black lab now. BIG DAWGS!